tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post4545626621140583135..comments2023-05-16T13:58:55.743+00:00Comments on Welcome to Maple Class: Mitchell's 100 Word Challenge - Week 26Maple Classhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15142234010068809517noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-59143236652224567852012-04-06T07:36:37.022+00:002012-04-06T07:36:37.022+00:00Hello Mitchell!
what a shame after all your effort...Hello Mitchell!<br />what a shame after all your efforts!You have thought really hard about the words you have used to paint a picture of espionage and James Bond! Well done!Mrs Skinnernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-78394305377599954022012-04-05T07:31:34.025+00:002012-04-05T07:31:34.025+00:00I really like all your descriptive words such as &...I really like all your descriptive words such as "shimmy". I love the idea of a dangerous mission just to steal a chocolate bunny, even if it was special. To make it even better remember not to switch tenses as I found that a bit confusing to read.Apart from that it was great. <br />Check out our blog at <br />http://www.tetherdown-primary-school.j2webby.com/Jessicanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-67931225110696994192012-03-29T17:45:10.737+00:002012-03-29T17:45:10.737+00:00Nice story Mitch. I like some of your vocabulary s...Nice story Mitch. I like some of your vocabulary such as 'clamber' and 'shimmy'. The one improvement is in your spelling...we normally say 'prized posession'. A great job though. Well done.<br />Mrs PMrs Priorhttp://mapleclassgreenfields.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com