tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post4801184714904151606..comments2023-05-16T13:58:55.743+00:00Comments on Welcome to Maple Class: Olivia's 100 Word ChallengeMaple Classhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15142234010068809517noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-21299989518880781512012-03-07T15:28:08.049+00:002012-03-07T15:28:08.049+00:00it was a very good story we think if you write ano...it was a very good story we think if you write another with more description it would be great!!<br /><br />from julia and tanya from rome classAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-31778941199221537672012-03-07T15:26:01.530+00:002012-03-07T15:26:01.530+00:00your story are good well done and i like ityour story are good well done and i like itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-12756072599806233802012-03-06T10:39:03.665+00:002012-03-06T10:39:03.665+00:00Hi Olivia,
What a fantastic story. I love that ev...Hi Olivia,<br /><br />What a fantastic story. I love that even though the neighbour has called the police, it is still possible to add to the ending story. You are encouraging the reader to use their imaginations. I also like how you have shown that Sarah is proud of her clay ball by using language like 'record breaker' and 'inspired'. I would recommend that you keep using sculpture and other forms of art as starting points for creative writing. Maybe next time try not to use the art so literally and look at what the piece may make you feel or what you think it may represent.Kelly Waugh (Roehampton University)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-80495714864733438542012-03-04T15:36:07.854+00:002012-03-04T15:36:07.854+00:00Hi Olivia,
What a great cliff hanger! I'm won...Hi Olivia,<br />What a great cliff hanger! I'm wondering whether the clay sculpture got damaged, or was sold for a very high price. You have left me eager to find out what happens next. This is a great 100WC entry. Keep up the brilliant writing. :)Mrs. Pheasey (Team 100WC)http://www.teachersgem.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-61513739164115117182012-03-01T17:52:01.133+00:002012-03-01T17:52:01.133+00:00Hello Olivia, your entry into 100wc 22 is quite ea...Hello Olivia, your entry into 100wc 22 is quite early. So nice to read your story which leaves one truly inspired about how little things can grow so big. Keep writing. This is goodOlusola(Team 100wc)http://thebankyschool.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-40352070247261302752012-03-01T16:46:00.510+00:002012-03-01T16:46:00.510+00:00I really liked this is was very creative. This is ...I really liked this is was very creative. This is a story that won't bore people.To bad though, that robbers had to rob the house.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-82030286573897436572012-03-01T16:45:12.420+00:002012-03-01T16:45:12.420+00:00I really like this piece of writing. I though it w...I really like this piece of writing. I though it was creative and a really nice piece. Can't wait to hear more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-92011639411440431932012-03-01T14:34:13.937+00:002012-03-01T14:34:13.937+00:00Hi Olivia!
What a wonderful entry to 100WC. I lo...Hi Olivia! <br /><br />What a wonderful entry to 100WC. I love the sense of pride that is softly invoked in the beginning of the piece. It was fantastic to read how something as small as a packet of modeling clay could inspire someone to break records! You have left me wanting to read more which is always a brilliant sign! <br /><br />I look forward to your next entry.<br />NiamhNiamh Beirnehttp://100wc.netnoreply@blogger.com