tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post4959172198420261432..comments2023-05-16T13:58:55.743+00:00Comments on Welcome to Maple Class: Francesca's 100 word challenge Week 24Maple Classhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15142234010068809517noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-7509969369620625632012-04-20T10:57:24.124+00:002012-04-20T10:57:24.124+00:00Hi Fran
I realy like how you discribed that the wh...Hi Fran<br />I realy like how you discribed that the white spiders were so white they were almost invisible from JessJessnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-74330393613619747052012-03-23T08:10:07.082+00:002012-03-23T08:10:07.082+00:00Franny that was amazing! I adore the description o...Franny that was amazing! I adore the description of the spiders. Keep writing!Prawnsandhummusnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-78948465347778642512012-03-22T19:20:05.089+00:002012-03-22T19:20:05.089+00:00Hi Fran
I really like your 100 wc! Fancy having m...Hi Fran <br />I really like your 100 wc! Fancy having mr Kenyon leaving you a comment! One thing to improve is to check your work because one sentence dosen't make sence apart from that it was amazing!! SashaSassynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-91063291279503103122012-03-22T09:51:50.886+00:002012-03-22T09:51:50.886+00:00Well Franny. I like your 100wc, infact I love it b...Well Franny. I like your 100wc, infact I love it but, like Mr K, that little sentence didn't make sense but other-wise. BRILLIANT.<br />RhiannonRhiannonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-42411372248211050482012-03-19T21:16:18.816+00:002012-03-19T21:16:18.816+00:00Hi Fran
I really enjoyed your 100 wc when you rea...Hi Fran <br />I really enjoyed your 100 wc when you read it out! I could really imagine the picture. You have used all the promt words in your story! Well done Fran!!!!<br />From sassy spider xSassynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-47858660418672019422012-03-19T16:06:01.806+00:002012-03-19T16:06:01.806+00:00Well I do comments for the 100wc and look who'...Well I do comments for the 100wc and look who's I've been given!!!<br /><br />You've used that tricky prompt well, Franny - well done. Although I do hate the idea of spiders crawling around everywhere - ugh! Do always make sure that you check through your work for any small mistakes - eg: 'a miniature white blurs'. <br /><br />I hope the spider's bite didn't hurt too much! Keep on blogging, Franny!<br />Mr K :-)Mr Kenyon (Team 100wc!)http://www.ashclassgreenfields.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com