tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post8032634742006216389..comments2023-05-16T13:58:55.743+00:00Comments on Welcome to Maple Class: Jack B's 100 Word Challenge Week 27Maple Classhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15142234010068809517noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-76964184049285491972012-04-27T13:33:49.627+00:002012-04-27T13:33:49.627+00:00a good 100 word chalange we like the way you say t...a good 100 word chalange we like the way you say that its in a zoo<br /><br />jay and mattyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-86750622356944049882012-04-24T11:03:21.310+00:002012-04-24T11:03:21.310+00:00Hello Jack. What an original use of the prompt. I ...Hello Jack. What an original use of the prompt. I loved reading your post. you have used a wide variety of sentence openers and your punctuation use it excellent. Well Done!Mrs Sutton (Team 100wc)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01608938279836399434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-53513030155410800362012-04-22T08:37:55.292+00:002012-04-22T08:37:55.292+00:00Hi Jack. This is a wonderfully imaginative piece ...Hi Jack. This is a wonderfully imaginative piece of writing. I love the idea of Scaly-beast Slush Puppies and of the dragon being the one to make them.<br /><br />I also thought your opening sentence was very mature - it's hard to believe that you are only Year 6.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing this story. It's really brightened up my day.Sally-Jayne (Team 100WC)http://www.sjbteaching.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-49700117799409903112012-04-20T16:58:15.397+00:002012-04-20T16:58:15.397+00:00Hi Mrs Prior
Thanks for the comment!
My idea for t...Hi Mrs Prior<br />Thanks for the comment!<br />My idea for this came from the film 'The Zoo Keeper'CoolJackB444https://www.blogger.com/profile/08336250953137340245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-75877534176454564782012-04-20T15:38:54.874+00:002012-04-20T15:38:54.874+00:00Thanks for the amazing comments!Thanks for the amazing comments!CoolJackB444https://www.blogger.com/profile/08336250953137340245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-80371905338369772232012-04-20T11:01:34.885+00:002012-04-20T11:01:34.885+00:00Great 100 WC Jack. I think the humour comes acros...Great 100 WC Jack. I think the humour comes across really well in your story. I don't think I will be eating any Scaly-beast slushies anytime soon. Great effort with your punctuation today. <br />Keep up this super work.<br />Mrs PMrs Priorhttp://www.mapleclassgreenfields.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-68202849917267277162012-04-20T11:00:19.175+00:002012-04-20T11:00:19.175+00:00Wow Jack! That was amazing! I cant think of any mo...Wow Jack! That was amazing! I cant think of any more ways to improve it. i liked at the end how you used ellipsis twice near the end! good ending for a 100WC! 100/10!<br /><br />Jack NAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7685234606106224921.post-36044948454352490102012-04-20T10:54:07.119+00:002012-04-20T10:54:07.119+00:00Hi Jack
I loved your 100 word challenge and I thou...Hi Jack<br />I loved your 100 word challenge and I thought how the dragon stirred the mixture. Suddenly whoever drank the slush puppies died, what a twist to the end.<br />From EllaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com