Monday, 18 June 2012

Michael's 100 Word Challenge Week 34

One casual day I was walking down the street and suddenly I saw a man mugging a frail old lady! I couldn't help but go over to the phone box and call the police, SWAT team, Someone! When they picked up the phone I shouted down to the officer.  Quick help someone's being mugged! The police woman kept calm about the situation.  I was so angry about that. Suddenly I ran towards him. He started to run away.  I chased and chased but he was to fast for me.  I got in my car and saw him pull out a gun. BANG! Goodbye.
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2 comments:

  1. Aran20 June 2012 at 12:48

    Hi Michael! I really like the story of the theif and the old lady. I Really like the description at the end It's really dramatic.

    keep up the good work Aran!

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  2. Jack.w6 July 2012 at 10:26

    I enjoyed this story because it hase good desciption and it hase a dramatic ending. Nice work Michael.

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