The ground slowly parted....
Suddenly I woke up to an earpinching scream. It sounded like an earthquake. I ran downstairs as quick as a flash.. The whole room was a wreck and I went through the now tilted door way and looked around the street. Everything was either crushed, split or destroed. There was a crack split open in the middle of the road. As well as that I felt like something, was following me. Just then there was a massive bang. All I could see was a hudge blob and before I could make it out I fell into the ground and everything went black!
Hi aran nice story bye the way it really puts you in the situation
ReplyDeleteWell done aran! i love it you described it very well i was on the edge of my seat i also love the ending "everything went black ..." awesome ending from Mitchell.
ReplyDeleteHi Aran I realy like your 100wc.
ReplyDeleteI like your 100 word challenge Aran. It is well descriptive and I like your sentence when you 'Suddenly i woke up to an earpinching scream.'
ReplyDeleteRhiannon
Hi Aran! Great description of the scene, I could picture it really well! The only problem is, you put destroed rather than destroyed. Brilliant 100wc!!
ReplyDeletehi Aran (its Toby) i know i have already said this i just really like you story. also i know this has nothing to do with this but i am really looking foward to manner are you?
ReplyDeleteHi maple I really like my 1oowc but I noticed that there is a couple of spelling corrections that I could of corrected.
ReplyDeletesee you later
Aran