Mind Control
It all
started when I met him in the alley, his evil surged through my body. I don’t
remember anything before, or after I just wake to ‘man found dead with 9700
stab wounds’ or ‘dead family found with many bullet holes to the head’. I
realised it was me when I met him once more in an alley and he said, “you’re a
murderer!” and when my dreams of killing are on the news!
That
Friday after school I decided to go to the shop when I walked in shopkeeper Jim said “how can I
help you?” then my vision went blurry, I saw a shape in my hand it
looked like a pistol I heard a bang and woke up in prison…
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteI love your 100 wc! It is amazing. I love the way that you have said his mind went blurry and said I heard a gun and then I woke up in prison! Well done
I always like your writing in class
Sassy
Goodness me, Alex - what a terrifying 100wc entry! I particularly like the opening to the first paragraph: it's so mysterious and really grabbed my attention.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Mr K :-)
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