Monday 18 June 2012
Jack N's 100 Word Challenge Week 34
I walked into a cave and suddenly I saw it. The legendary pencil. It did absolutely nothing compared to a normal pencil. That's why it's called the Legendary Pencil. The only difference is that the legendary pencil is made of solid gold.I would have to be careful because there were skeletons everywhere and that could mean traps. I mean death traps. Traps that lead to death. I saw a trip wire. I would have to pull it out to find out what would happen. It wobbled, and a lava pit opened up through the floor. I avoided it, grabbed the pencil, but fell into lava.
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Jack, your story reminds me a little of Indiana Jones! I wonder whether that lava means the end of you?! Will the legendary pencil live on?
ReplyDeleteWell done, a super piece of work this week.
Mrs P
Well done Jack, do you remember me. If you do ask your class if they remember me, this is a message for the whole class:
ReplyDeleteI MISS BEING THERE BUT I LIKE MY NEW SCHOOL AS WELL. hOPE YOU HAD A NICE TIME AT MANOR. i WENT TO ARTHOG INSTEAD IT WAS EEEEEPPPPPIIIIICCCCC!!!!!
uNTIL WE MEET AGAIN GOOD BYE!!
I liked this story because it's got a sence of humer and it has a good storyline(I'd love to have a golden pencil)
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