Tuesday, 17 April 2012

Emily's 100 Word Challenge Week 26


I was so excited! It was the Easter holidays and I was going away to Lanzarote.
I love Easter…all those lovely chocolate eggs. I couldn’t take my eggs with me because it was going to be too hot, so I would have to wait until I got home to eat them.
When I arrived at the hotel I put my hand in my pocket and discovered a chocolate rabbit. I forgot I’d put it there when my friend gave it me on the last day of term. I put it on the side and went out. When I came back the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun!
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3 comments:

  1. Rhiannon18 April 2012 at 20:08

    Hi Emily.
    I love your piece of writing. It's different to the other's, I think.
    Rhi Rhi

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  2. Rhiannon4 May 2012 at 11:03

    Hi Emily, how strange, i an the only comment on your post. Hey, I paticuly like the sentence, 'I love Easter...all those chocolate eggs'
    Rhiannon

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  3. chloe oak class5 May 2012 at 18:49

    Hi Emily
    I love your 100 word challenge I think it is very good hope you do a another 100 word challenge well done love from Chloe your sister :)x

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