Saturday 5 May 2012

Joe's 100 Word Challenge. Week 29

Wow! I had overheard (eavesdropped) my parents speaking about going to a marvellous castle trip.  I excitedly jumped around the room noisily.  I couldn't wait. I put my ear against the door to see if I could hear any more good news - the door swung open.  Busted!  I had been caught.  My excited outrage had attracted some attention. As I looked up, I saw a pair of angry, suspicious and frustrated looking parents, I was in deep trouble. I was getting ready for them to chew me out but they just sent me to my sisters bright pink room.  Out the window a bird flew by.
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  1. Anna7 May 2012 at 15:15

    Hi Joe,
    I thought your post quit descriptive in parts like "I overheard my parents speaking about going to a marvelous castle trip."! I checked the spelling on marvelous, turns out you miss- spelled it.I was just wondering if this story was actually true, is it?
    -ANNA,Colorado

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    1. Joe (Greenfields)10 May 2012 at 10:54

      Hi anna I wish I was going on a castle trip, thank you for pointing out my little mistakes.Oh and what school do you come from?
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