The beach of wonder
It was the most amazing thing I had ever seen. Billions of tiny jewels glimmered in the bright sunlight, acting like sand on this incredible beach. The gentle waves, as blue as the sky, weren't like normal seawater, they were sugar-water with the medical properties to cure every disease. I pulled out a small pouch and a flask from my rucksack and started to scoop up the jewels and sugar-water. But then I remembered. Legend has it that whoever steals from this wondrous site will be cursed for the rest of their lives! What had I done?
hi rosie,
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sassy