The Emerald statue
I can't believe it! I
am looking at the statue of emerald. I am living to tell the tale of this
magnificent shiny statue. Shimmering with light glowing gleaming in my eyes.
This antiquated statue has not been found for years. This statue holds a world
wide powerful crystal inside. This is shaped in a weird shape its like a
pyramid. As the bright blistering sun light shines on it, I want to get closer
but I don’t know if I should, oh well, nothing can happen there wont be a bomb
on it or something. I take one step….
Hi Luke,
ReplyDeleteI love your 100 wc! I love the bit were you put
I am living to tell the tale of this magnificent shiny staue. Shimmering with light glowing gleaming in my eyes. Well done Luke!!
Sassy
Hi Luke,
ReplyDeleteWe agree with Sassy - you have a wonderful way with words. Also that's a terrific cliff hanger ending there.
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Tim and Moby
This is spectacular Luke. Firstly, I like how you have used alliteration, 'bright blistering' and 'glowing gleaming'. That's amazing! In addition to the eclipic(...). However the only tiny downside is that you have used the opener 'this' three times. Despite this it's a magnifecent piece of writing.
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Great Luke I think that you have tried really hard with this and it shows. You must be a level 5.You have biult up an amazing bit of tension.
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Great Luke you have tried really hard with this and it shows. You have really biult up the tention.
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