Splash! I fell straight into the slushy mess. “It's good but
it still needs something,” I thought. “Now what do I need?” I thought my very
hardest until I came up with what I thought my gross, goo bath needed. “Ah ha,
I’ve got it,” I shouted “worms that’s perfect.” Hurriedly, I got out of the
disgusting bath and rushed into the garden with a trowel and began to dig for
my final ingredient. In the end, I found twenty four fat, filthy worms. I
chucked them into my revolting bath. “This will make me into a millionaire,” I
chuckled.
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteWe really liked your 100 word challenge!
We liked how you used flithy fat worms.
From Jess and Rebecca
I really like your 100 word challenge Olivia. I like the sentence where it says I found twenty four fat,filthy worms.
ReplyDeleteGood 100 word challenge very good use of punctuation you have really tried hard on this peice of writting
ReplyDeleteI really like your unusual way of using the prompt Olivia. I don't think I'd like to take one of your baths though!
ReplyDeleteSuper work.
Mrs P
Well look which 100wc I've been given to comment on this week! This is a lovely, but totally disgusting 100wc entry - well done! I wonder how it will make you a millionaire? Maybe you'll sell it in Boots?
ReplyDeleteI think Mrs P will be very pleased with the variety of vocabulary and sentence types you have used here - I think you should get her a bottle of the mixture to celebrate!
Mr K :-)
Good job Olivia I liked your 100 word challenge!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!