Saturday, 5 May 2012

Aran's 100 Word Challenge Week 29

As I left the marvellous castle, I headed into the forbidden forest! In the forest it was a place where no light could escape.  Everywhere was dark and neglected. Moreover, the place was bleak and I felt like something was following me. Something big! Suddenly the ground shook and it felt like the surface benif me was falling apart.  Just then as scaley dragon flew right infront of me.  The hudge beast opened it's jaw and let out a roar so noisily that my ear drums nearly burst! As I steadied myself, I picked up my sword and stabed the dragon through his brain.  As I left the forest, a pink sun slowly stirred.


  1. Hello Aran, I enjoyed reading your 100WC entry! Your use of short sharp sentences and description makes your writing really interesting to read. You've put together the prompt words well to make a lovely story. Keep up the good work!

  2. Aran,I like your amazing word choice.I don't think I could have written a better piece with only 100 words! You your class's best writer?You had amazing expression!

  3. Hi Aran
    I really liked your 100wc, it is defenately better than anything i've written! I especially liked the part when you said ' where no light could escape' great use of vocabulary