Tuesday, 3 April 2012

Rosie's 100 Word Challenge Week 26

“YAAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! It’s Easter!“ I screamed as I ran down the stairs. I pulled on my clothes and grabbed my basket for the egg hunt. When we arrived, I could see that almost every child in the area had turned up. ”GO!” At the sound of that word, a stampede of children came past me. I started to explore, looking in every possible hiding place I could see. After finding two measly mini eggs, I noticed something in the bush. An oversized bunny hopping around with a coat  that looked like it was made from chocolate. I inched closer and suddenly, the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun.


  1. Thank you Rosie! Another great piece of writing from you. You show a very competitive side to you here! Some nice use of language 'stampede of children' and 'inched closer'. Well done.
    Mrs P

  2. Hello Rosie,
    What a lovely piece of writing. 'Measly mini eggs' is good; in fact your use of adjectives throughout is great. You make Easter sound so exciting!
    Can't wait.
    Liz (Team 100WC)

  3. What a fabulous story Rosie. I really enjoyed reading this. Your use of vocabulary is very good and had made your writing very exciting! Well done, keep up the good work.

  4. Wow Rosie this is a amazing piece of wrighting you sould be very proud of your self. I thik that the vocabulary you use (stampede,explore)and many more are great. Also I like how you have used speech in your wrighting and have put comers in the right place. Well done and keep up the good work!
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  5. Hi Rosie
    I love your 100 word challenge, good use of punctuation and connectives well done and keep up the good work

    from Matty

  6. Hi Rosie
    I thought your 100 word was great!
    I liked the words that you have used like stampede.
    I also thought you used some good puncuation.

    From Rebecca