Friday, 10 February 2012

Olivia's 100 Word Challenge Week 20

Internet gone bust!

Yesterday, four year old Charlie Carlson crashed the internet across the whole entire world. Charlie said that he was playing an online game when an error occured on his screan and when he clicked on the exit it only took him further.

The internet is trying to be re-conected but it will not work. "when it happened the screen when blank and an exclamation mark flashed on the screan," Charlie told us."it wasn't my fault though!
Charlie's punishment will be a sixty million pound fine!
This little rebel's mother, Corrine, said, "I have no idea how I will ever pay it all, Will I get in a lot of trouble?"



  1. Hi i like ur story it's AMAZING!!!!! it would be a pain if the internet stopped working.

  2. WOW what a horror i would like to see if her mum actually pays it all.

  3. Imagine if it did! The world would go crazy!!!!! I think his mum and dad should be charged fifty million pounds and the boy should be told to keep away from a computer for ten years!
    P.S I like the style it was written in

    Jack B

  4. hi Olivia
    i think your 100 word challange is amazing
    i like the idea of the internet gone bust
    keep the good work up

  5. Nice 100wc olivia I loved the idea of a little boy crashing the internet and getting a sixty million pound fine
    From Ella

  6. A four year old crashing the internet! The brilliant journalist, Olivia is sure to be in the action of this story! I love your 100wc Olivia!