Friday 10 February 2012

Joe's 100 Word Challenge Week 20

It wasn't my fault . . .
He was on the floor,shins cut open, motionless. I held the blood stained hockey stick in one hand, fear and anger in the other, everyone looked at me in dispare, worried yet ashamed. They were the judges and I was the suspect guilty of murder. I lay sobbing, my hand were as wet as a swimming pool, I looked up, I didn't know what to do but then I got some courage to speak, but all I said "It wasn't my fault," but they stared at me, boaring a hole in my head. I couldn't move, pinned by their beedy eyes. At that moment . . . Iwanted to be dead.

by Joe

7 comments:

  1. it was very gripping and no spelling mistakes. job well done joe: by jon.

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  2. well done Joe that story is amazing i love the first few sentences so much detail that makes it work

    from mitchell

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  3. I really like your 100 word challenge Joe. It is very descriptive and it is really good.

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  4. :O SCAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. I thought I should put a little more than in my last comment. The scary effect was great but check some of the spelling.

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  6. Joe you should be a horror story author when your older! You've got a great imagination for occurances and creatures that make us all feel terrified!

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  7. thanks guys i realy apreciate the comments thank you
    by Joe

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