Friday 3 February 2012

Aran's 100 word challenge week 19

The ground slowly parted....
Suddenly I woke up to an earpinching scream. It sounded like an earthquake.  I ran downstairs as quick as a flash.. The whole room was a wreck and I went through the now tilted door way and looked around the street.  Everything was either crushed, split or destroed.  There was a crack split open in the middle of the road.  As well as that I felt like something, was following me.  Just then there was a massive bang.  All I could see was a hudge blob and before I could make it out I fell into the ground and everything went black!

7 comments:

  1. Hi aran nice story bye the way it really puts you in the situation

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  2. Well done aran! i love it you described it very well i was on the edge of my seat i also love the ending "everything went black ..." awesome ending from Mitchell.

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  3. Hi Aran I realy like your 100wc.

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  4. I like your 100 word challenge Aran. It is well descriptive and I like your sentence when you 'Suddenly i woke up to an earpinching scream.'

    Rhiannon

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  5. Hi Aran! Great description of the scene, I could picture it really well! The only problem is, you put destroed rather than destroyed. Brilliant 100wc!!

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  6. hi Aran (its Toby) i know i have already said this i just really like you story. also i know this has nothing to do with this but i am really looking foward to manner are you?

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  7. silly fruit5679 March 2012 at 11:45

    Hi maple I really like my 1oowc but I noticed that there is a couple of spelling corrections that I could of corrected.

    see you later

    Aran

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