Monday, 19 March 2012

Matty M's 100 Word Challenge Week 24


Spiders
Ding Dong! went the  sound of my door  bell. I glanced out the window to see if it was it was my two best friends in the school Luke and Kyle . I went to the door, opened it and Kyle said “are you playing out?”
I replied “yes be there in a minute gotta put my trainers on.”
I dashed towards the shoe cupboard and carefully pulled out my lovely Nike trainers not knowing there was a white spider pushed up agents the wall. I was petrified. Then ever so close there was a little hole where about fifty spiders were crawling out of.

9 comments:

  1. Hi matty
    I really like your 100 wc! I think you have used good words like glanced and petrified! Well done!
    From sassy spider x

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  2. Hi, I like your 100wc but you are missing some capital letters and some punctuation.

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  3. Hi Matty

    Your 100 wc, i thought was a success

    well done!!!

    from Devil$$$

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  4. That sounds creepy! Great story matty I bet Luke and Kyle were pleased you said they were your best friends! Pandagirl out :3

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  5. nice spider story

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  6. Not too much wrong with your punctuation Matt.Well done for getting on the blog,a really good piece of writing keep it up love from Charl xxx

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  7. wow that was amazing matty i like your punctuation i like the word glanced and petrified keep up this amazing work from kyle

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  8. well done on your 100 word challenge Matt. i like the bit where you said about kyle and luke

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