Thursday 1 March 2012

Mitch's 100 Word Challenge

Muhahahaha! The scientist screamed as his creation rose to life. I t was a giant ball of clay and its purpose was to decompose rubbish. As the scientist brought his creation to life, it suddenly got struck by lightning. The ball of clay rapidly turned green it was EVIL! The ball destructively broke out of its glass case and tore a hole in the wall. The ball broke out on a violent rampage around the city knocking the Eiffel tower over and every landmark in the process! The gigantic ball gathered height, it would soon destroy the whole wide world!

6 comments:

  1. Hannah M (St. John Vianney)1 March 2012 at 16:40

    I liked your story! Be sure to proofread your work, though. Good job!

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  2. I liked your use of adjectives in this. It is a nicely written piece.

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  3. Prawnsandhummus5 March 2012 at 20:30

    Excellent Mitchell! The description and imagination was brilliant! Your great at writing and great at videos! I hope to see more work on the blog from you!

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  4. hiya mitch

    well done i thought it was amazing very very very amazing.

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  5. Good story mich

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