Friday 9 March 2012

Jack N's 100 Word Challenge

Unfortunately, last night, the weather changed for the worst. Volcanoes erupted, rivers flooded and tornadoes whirled. It was chaos. Although I didn’t witness it, I knew what happened, and more importantly, how it happened. Last night, I left the tap running all night long. Then, as we live near the sea, it flooded into the sea, and straight to the rivers, and then it all flooded. I have absolutely no idea how the volcanoes fit in, but I do know the tornadoes part. Behind the garage is a voltage box. As my lamp wasn’t working, I turned it up a notch. But suddenly, lightning came out of the sky, and hit the voltage box. Then a storm came, and destroyed everything.

6 comments:

  1. Well done Jack. Acer class are enjoying reading your 100wc.

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  2. Hi jack
    That was really good
    It was a nightmare that you had done all them things to corse it! Keep up the good work
    Sasha

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  3. Check ou the imagery in this post! Brilliantly described right from the opening sentences. Massive well done.

    Mr Harrison
    Headteacher
    Miriam Lord, Bradford.

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  4. Sophie W. (St. John Vianney)14 March 2012 at 17:54

    Very nice story, I liked the whole imaginary thing. Very creative.

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  5. Well done Jack i like how you left the tap on all night and it triggered all that chaos!

    By Alex

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